Week 27: Daily Haiku

Here’s the week’s best from me.

My week started in a traffic jam. Not a terrible one, but I was stuck for a few minutes in a traffic queue in the city which gave me time to safely do a bit of people watching.

The first effort I am almost embarrassed to read to you, but here goes:

people watching
through the car window—
silent movies

A bit too cliched and I’m sure that others will have written on a similar theme.

This one I feel has more merit, but I am struggling with the first line:

framed by the window—
a young couple
half in love

I hope you get it. I think there is just about a juxtaposition. Feedback more than welcome.

 

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