spring breeze
she wags her finger
at the youth

This was inspired by a recent trip on a tram. It’s not unusual here in Zürich, for little old ladies travelling the on the tram to chastise teenagers when they do something wrong.

It is spring here, at least for a little while, but the reason I used spring breeze was that a spring breeze is chilly without being totally cold and it seemed to me that this finger wagging at the youth on the train was a gentle way of admonishing him which fits with my notion of the spring breeze being cool without being freezing and harsh. A wagging finger also creates a gentle breeze. Is it making sense to you?

Week 30: Daily Haiku

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